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     Coming out of the hospital Ember found Flame to her left, sitting against a wall, with his knees to his chest, arms crossed, and head on his arms. Walking to the front of him, without him noticing, she just stood there for a bit. "It's not what you think it is." she finally said after a bit.
     "So let me guess. You don't still have feelings for Spyro and I didn't see what I thought I did in the hospital room?" Flame said, in an obviously sarcastic tone, while raising his head, revealing the tears in his eyes.
     "I...I thought I didn't, but now that he's back, I find that I still do. When he was away, I didn't think of him, not much anyways. I thought I would be over him but now it's just..." Ember said embarrassed and confused.
     "I get it," Flame started, "If you like him, then I won't keep you from him, but we're through. I can date you if you still like him."
     "But, Flame..." Ember said, as though she had something to protest with.
     "Bye, Ember." Flame said, leaving her.
     Falling to her knees Ember started crying.
     From Spyro's window he watched. Then looking down he drew a heart around two names; Ember and Spyro.
Well short, but chapter 6. Beats me how long this will be. I'm thinking, maybe, hopefully 15 or so parts. But I doubt it will be close. Farther, closer? Idk. Well I'm gonna stop adding journals after every added part. It's just gonna be to much. So yeah, outa the blue, but they wil be from now on. I just tried posting this and guess what, the catagory of Literature, Prose, Fiction, Fantasy changes to fantasy & historical, then says it can't be saved. So I'm going with romance teen. That's with the change, k? And now general fiction.... Oh, there's a fan fiction section? wait is that only for art, after all it is in art. Whatever. posting. (hopefully)

Spyro (c) by Sierra
Flame and Ember (c) by Universal
Soria and story (c) by me

Please comment, especailly if you see a spelling error. In the comments that I write I don't care though.
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:icontimberlinewolf:
TimberlineWolf Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Student General Artist
I think what you want Flame to say is, "I can't date if you still lik him."
Graeet story so far I can't wait to see what happens next
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DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice chapter o3o
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Kmn483 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010
thanks! :)
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :D
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