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     Ember was laying on her bed, doing nothing, like she has been doing since her and Flame's breakup, when there was a knock at her door.
     'Is that Flame?' She thought, while running down the stairs and opening the door, surprised and disappointed to find only Spyro.
     "Hi Ember." Spyro said, casually as ever.
     "Oh, hi Spyro." Ember replied, not hiding her disappointment from her voice.
     "Were you expecting someone else?" Asked Spyro, knowing all to well her answer.
     "Well it would have been nice to see Flame on the other side of the door, but anyways..." Ember said, perking up, "It seems they let you out of the hospital early..."
     "I'm sorry Ember." Spyro said, looking down.
     "What for?"
     "I saw what happened, that you and Flame broke up." Spyro explained, looking at Ember again.
     "It wasn't your fault," Ember said now being the one to look down, crying without noticing, "If he can't accept that I like you then it's better that we broke up."
     With Spyro's paw he lifted Ember's chin so she would face him, leaning in for a kiss, but Ember turned away.
     "You need to leave." Ember said, in a very serous voice, just now realizing she's been crying.
     And so he did. Without closing the door behind him, Spyro left Ember's house, clenching a fist and holding back tears of his own.
Um short one, Spyro leans in for a kiss, and rejected! Oh to bad Spyro... Does Ember still like Spyro? Will Ember get back together with Flame? And will I ever get the tuna sandwich I ordered. Possibly find out next time on Regan Ball D!!!!! (Bad refrence to Dragon Ball Z.... Hehe baldy)

Spyro (c) by Sierra
Flame and Ember (c) by Universal
Soria and story (c) by me

Plz tell me if there are any errors, i like it to be as error free as impossible. As you can tell when i wrote this comment i was in a very weird mood. Good day you ppl.
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bigboy980 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
No way, man! Ember would never love Spyro again! (because she still feel hurt as Flame broke up with her!) oh, i feel so sorry for Ember... :(
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Kmn483 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
It was a moment of weekness for Ember back at the hospital, and with out knowing it Spyro took advantage of it, but now trying to get this..... just going far to far, she deffiantly has other thoughts now.
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bigboy980 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
ummm... I just wondered that at the first and second chapter, it almost feel like Spyro doesn't care about Ember but this one Spyro just KISSED Ember! Yeah, and that did really hurt Flame.
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Kmn483 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
It's really odd horrible how he's treating Ember huh?
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bigboy980 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
yeah, you're right... probably
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Kmn483 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
lol, you'll have to see. ^.^
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bigboy980 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2011
Ummm... actually, you're totally right! But only one thing that the story ends up in a strange way: Ember's alone with no one!
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Kmn483 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
Have u read my latest chapter? :p
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NDKilla Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011
OHHHHHHHHHH SNAPPPPPPPPPP
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Kmn483 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011
Spyro got rejected! :O
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